A Bible Poem About Genesis ~ Rhyming Adam and Eve through Abraham

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By hillrider

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Though it's been debated, the world was created,

when God first said let there be light

He made Earth and Heaven, that first day of seven

and saw it was good in his sight

I opened a book that spoke of an Adam
From whom it said all had descended
Who ate of a fruit that imparted knowledge
Or at least that’s what I comprehended.


It said he’s a type of someone named Chris
Although this one was spelled with a “t”
A book hard to learn that took time to discern
About this Word sent to save you and me 

It spoke about Eve whom a serpent deceived
An act from which all misery’s wrought
That brought condemnation on all of creation
And is why this guy Christ must be sought.


It spoke of poor Abel, killed by his brother
For naught but a failed sacrifice
How Cain offered fruit,though work doesn’t suit
When none but a Lamb can suffice.


It then lists the births as they try to fill Earth
With men giving praise to the Lord
But their hearts became haughty,actions got naughty
And the Maker grew ever ignored.

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Then a rainbow proved later that a sorry Creator 
Who’s covenants come sealed in blood 
Saved Noah,the brothers,their wives and the mother 
When He covered the Earth in a flood


He destroyed under Heaven, all but Noah and seven 
Of all animals that were clean 
Two by two resolutely to an ark made astutely 
Came a line of the like we’ve not seen. 


As the numners increased of all living beasts 
Both clean and unclean came by pair 
Having food for them all,both massive and small 
Seven each of birds of the air. 


In the ark these all dwelt,at the end Noah knelt 
Built an altar and worshiped the Lord 
Went forth in abundance,multiplied with redundance 
Until life upon Earth was restored. 

In man’s lust for power he built up a tower 
To the heaven’s he thought it woould reach 
In his quest for a name he brought only shame 
And caused God to confuse all our speech. 


Thus man was scattered to prove that what mattered 
Was that we bow down and give praise 
Being humble and meek it is His ways we seek 
And He will then lengthen our days. 

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This exact situation without variation 
Would soon be a cause of distress 
When invading royals partook of the spoils 
And Lot was caught up in the mess. 


Because his nephew was in need of rescue 
Abram’s forces went on the attack 
Lest one of those taken might be forsaken 
He pursued and brought everything back. 


Refusing a thing from Bera the king 
Lest another should grant him increase 
Tithing out of respect to Melchizedek 
The first ever mentioned as priest

Only Abram and Lot, of those Torah begot 
Are in those spoken of to have moved 
Through lands they would pass and later amass 
The Lord had already approved. 


But famine would force a southerly course 
And nearly got Sarai seduced 
He convinced her to lie,lest he should die 
As to Abram Egypt’s introduced. 


Then Pharoah relented and Abram repented 
Her beauty the cause of their sin 
Having sought to deceive such an easy reprieve 
Promised this would yet happen again. 


Packing his tent further south Abram went 
Near an altar he had built at Bethel 
Where he and Lot stressed because all they possessed 
Was to great for them both there to dwell. 


So Abram gave voice letting Lot take his choice 
Of that which was good in his sight 
Seeking not God’s advice he chose what looked nice 
He went left Abram went to the right. 


Take time and pay heed to all that you read 
For looks are quite often deceiving 
To each their own sake ,let choices you make 
Not then be the cause of your grieving. 

” I am” said the Lord, “your great reward
I’m your shield,do not be afraid “
The lack of an heir Abram stated with care
Was the reason which he was dismayed.


A vision explained what the promise contained
As Abram fell deep into slumber
Exceedingly your descendants shall be
Count tne stars if you’re able to number.


Although they believed she still hadn’t conceived
For a decade and started to worry
Though somewhat misguided Sarai then decided
To help God along in her hurry.


She soon realized that she was despised
Hagar looked on her with derision
Instead of elation she brought consternation
The ensuing result was division.


Hagar had a child that grew to be wild
As the angel had rightly predicted
There at the well he was named Ishmael
For God saw that she was afflicted.


At age ninety-nine as a covenant sign
Abraham underwent circumcision
An additional token his new name was spoken
That explained the Almighty’s decision.


After doing the math God vented his wrath
From the heavens rained brimstone and fire
Remember Lot’s wife,this one lost her life
Looking back upon sinful desire.


Though Abraham pleaded it must be conceded
In Sodom the righteous were few
Most vice had enslaved the rest were depraved
What else was a just God to do?


When it was confided that God had decided
That Sarah would also give birth
She clearly denied having first laughed inside
Embarrassed it seems by her mirth.


Abraham didn’t falter from building an altar 
A task that most surely was daunting 
Issac like a sheep,lain on top in a heap 
An image both morbid and haunting. 


Then raising the knife to take his son’s life 
In a moment of unbridled tension 
His son would be slayed yet still he obeyed 
Until stopped by divine intervention. 


Because he prevailed where most would’ve failed 
If we were thus put to the test 
He secured his position by faithful submission 
And God assured he would be blessed.


As my first hub I just decided to share a piece of poetry I wrote awhile back that I hope to finish one day. I will become better at navigation and return to edit this in the future in the hopes of making it more visually appealing. Thanks for reading and feel free to share any impressions or comments. 

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Darknlovely3436 Level 5 Commenter 17 months ago

Great hub, you touch many part of the Bible with this poem... I felt like if I was reading some chapters in the Bible.

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hillrider Hub Author 17 months ago

Thanks, I hope you will return again and leave a comment when I have learned to navigate the site better and prepare more thorough content. This is an older piece, like myself, that doesn't see the light.

But as was Abrahan, I am blessed....

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Jaggedfrost Level 4 Commenter 16 months ago

hmm that is quite an epic there. It almost reads like poetic cliffs notes.

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hillrider Hub Author 16 months ago

Thanks for reading, perhaps your point is closer than I realized. Using it to teach was my desire and the references make that easy for me. Thanks for reading and the comment.

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Jaggedfrost Level 4 Commenter 16 months ago

Oh I enjoyed the bouquet, but I wonder at times, when I write and to what audience I am writing that The Bard best said it, brevity is the soul of wit but also, oft times the lifeblood of those who write online. As to the Cliffs notes, people read cliffs notes but often do not get the point because they are avoiding the deeper text being summarized. That is a sin of the reader not the writer per say.

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hillrider Hub Author 16 months ago

JF, I saw today a hub that simply makes a list of what the author believed each chapter was about. From chapter one through 50, where there is no real effort to expound on ANY of the salient points and his hub is ranked higher than this one so I am unsure anymore what "quality" original content is determined to be upon this site.

Since this is simply a poem I shared I am less than concerned it is rated well but I do wonder who is making these ratings and what constitutes effort and what is simply rubbish that is popular...

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Jaggedfrost Level 4 Commenter 16 months ago

I could care less about the ratings as well. My definition of quality is my own and I am sorry if I impose it improperly on you. My first hub wavers between seventy nine and 86 but it is the subject I dislike to write on the most. It was my first attempt at blogging until I found that I disliked being so frank. I promise none of my poems stay well rated at all although some spike high at times. I do understand that some of this has to do with number of hits per day. Some of the people here know how to back link their articles with various search engines and more power to them.

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LeslieAdrienne Level 2 Commenter 16 months ago

Nice hub.... really nice

a poem that walks through the Bible...when you finish it will be an excellent tool for remembering the order of events in the Word

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hillrider Hub Author 16 months ago

When I pick this back up I will again know I am fulfilling my purpose. And thanks, Your words are encouraging ...

Robert Hagedorn 16 months ago

Do a search: The First Scandal Adam and Eve.

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Phaseus 16 months ago

I absolutely loved it! It inspired me both as a Christian and as a Poet. I remembered all those bible stories I read when I was 10. I can also see what professional (in my opinion) Poetry looks like. You sir, deserve a great kudos!

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hillrider Hub Author 16 months ago

Thanks Phaseus. I have written poems for as long as i can remember and still wouldn't assign the pro title to my work. But thanks. And thanks for leaving a comment...

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Nan Mynatt Level 3 Commenter 15 months ago

Beautiful Bibical story and well written. You sound like a Bible student.

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hillrider Hub Author 15 months ago

Hey Nan, Thanks for stopping by, would hope this were truer, just a novice still. Improving though ...

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Dave Mathews Level 7 Commenter 9 months ago

Thank you! This is some beautiful poetry incorporating Bible Scripture. I Love it. Thanks again.

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hillrider Hub Author 7 months ago

Dave, Thanks for the read and comment. Haven't come online for awhile so I apologize for the late reply

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